This isn't a poem. its 50 shades of.. gratuitous, meant for diary, self-indulgence. you need a cold shower, I want the 5 minutes I wasted on this soft porn.. really?

I love how you went all out in this poem. When I first read this I thought it's about time lol. It's ok to have urges like this though. I loved all the details you bring here. It leads up to everything and then at the end the title comes into play. She teases and that is such a great title for it. :). Though I don't like to comment long on erotic poems I think it was the best one of yours I have read. Great write and it was fun to read :)