Comments : Just Want To See The Light

  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    This is wonderfully written! I'm sorry about all the pain you've gone through, I wish I could help! But just know that God will help you through it :) I hope you get through it!
    The only criticism I have is that, in the fifth stanza and the second line "to" should be "too".
    This is really beautifully written, I love your rhyming scheme you have created, and the choice of words is great :)