Lullaby (acrostic)

by Alanis   Sep 29, 2013


Lull me to sleep with your symphony
Utter words of my tireless surrender
Let my haze become a reality
Lift me higher and set me on a cloud
Abide by silence
Beds of a blunder swallow me in a single gulp
You have left me in an echo of emotions

Tried something new tell me what you think ^^

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is an excellent acrostic poem - beautiful language employed throughout. Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 11 years ago

    by Mello193

    Beautiful imagery. Great piece. Lots of emotional depth.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautiful and more like a song which engages you throughout. Nice usage of words hun!

    Amazing poem!

    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Av stayed long avin not read acrostic, this is really a piece, gud work

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Nicely done for something that you did for the first time, I was assuming that cause you said it was something "new". Anyhow, I like the combination of simple words and phrases that turned into something quite original. All in all, a very good one.

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