by Alanis Sep 29, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wish upon my shine |
by Redangelwings
I think paths should or would sound better as path. That is my only critic. I love stars so very much so I love how this one drew my eye. You do wish upon them indeed and they shine your way home. They are a positive light in anyone's life. As I have said I think stars are just eyes tnat shine and watch over us here. I love the night time as well. It to me is the most peaceful time of the whole 24 hr period. The last line is perfect to me. I believe our real home is in the stars and we are waiting for their light to guide us there. This is such a beautiful poem here you have made. It brought light to my heart. Xx 5 |
by Amy
Very well done! Your haikus are great |