Comments : White Horse [Acrostic]

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    Wow, just wow! This was an amazing acrostic! I think you should write this sort of thing more often lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I think this is the most beautiful love poem I have read from you Brittany. This is oveewhelming even for me to comment lol. Not many people can leave me speechless lol.

    The way you decribed this person though is wonderful.I love how you say love are flowers here. They reresurrected your love. I think overall love can be the most magical thing in the world which in reality is really what you are saying. Her presence is wonderful even with words. I agree I think words of caring and love are what are important because it really shows they care inside. Love can cause you to heal in many ways others can't. I again love how you say it. You care for Kate so much she healed you. Love will do that.

    Love always has a reason to come into your life. I think we see ourselves as weak and when that one person finds us we think of them as a godess so you say. I think thats matual between both people. You think that you are each others saviors. Again that's really what love is. Like you said a savior. Lol. It seems people always come into our life at the right time and itseems this pperson has. It can definitely be the wrong time to. But beside the point. They always plant joy into your heart. Anyway. I love how you used the title here because we all think of a white horse in a fairy tale. The prince saving the girl. I love your interesting spin on this though. You have done sich a great job here as to tell how you feel and it was beautifully written well done.

    • 11 years ago

      by Daylight Lucidity

      Thank you, James. This is one of many ways to explain how lucky I know I am to have her, and you are right. She did save me.