Because of her,Don't say goodbye
by Sabrina Ortiz Oct 1, 2013
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Is it because she wont accept it?Can we at least try?I care about u too much.Please don't say goodbye.Never say you love me if u mean goodbye.Just say we can try.Don't let her make it a goodbye.Change goodbye to hi.Hi.I love u.Just please don't say goodbye. |
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11 years ago
Thanks....I never really thought this was good.....It came from my heart though....Thanks everyone. ^_^
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11 years ago
I agree 1,000%
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11 years ago
by Jyoti Rawat
Full of love.
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11 years ago
by Amy
Great poem! Sad but good... Please don't be offended but I suggest that to make your poem neat you should seperate you sentences into single lines... And where you wrote "u" would be nicer as "you"
I love that you don't give up on the fact that you don't let her say goodbye, and it's true, you shouldn't say I love you and then say goodbye
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11 years ago
Thank you. I really like the tips. I'll keep them in mind. :)
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11 years agoby Redangelwings
This is a good poem. Kinda sad though. I always say this but when you are in love you never want anyone to leave. "I love you" is such a strong phrase and its hard to say that to someone. You want to try because love in the heart is hard to deal with. I like this poem because you show how much you care and you put your heart into this. Though the words are simple it has a strong message. Saying hi to someone is a first step to something more. Good poem.
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11 years ago
Thank you. :)
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