Please let me know what you think.

This is a good poem. Kinda sad though. I always say this but when you are in love you never want anyone to leave. "I love you" is such a strong phrase and its hard to say that to someone. You want to try because love in the heart is hard to deal with. I like this poem because you show how much you care and you put your heart into this. Though the words are simple it has a strong message. Saying hi to someone is a first step to something more. Good poem.

Great poem! Sad but good... Please don't be offended but I suggest that to make your poem neat you should seperate you sentences into single lines... And where you wrote "u" would be nicer as "you"
I love that you don't give up on the fact that you don't let her say goodbye, and it's true, you shouldn't say I love you and then say goodbye
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Full of love.

I agree 1,000%

Thanks....I never really thought this was good.....It came from my heart though....Thanks everyone. ^_^