Comments : I love you more

  • Simply beautiful

  • 11 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    Just the title itself made me want to read more of it, wonderful poem, so much emotion and heart it blew me away, wow, I think this is my favorite I ahve read of yours so far, please don't ever stop writing, this poem is toooo touching, it brought tears to my eyes, wonderful poem!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Love this one! Great Love poem!

    ~~Cuz after our first kiss, I never want to part.~~

    I really liked the last line! It just hit home for me! Great job!

    *~Britt-Bratt~*

    • 11 years ago

      by Matthew Alexander

      :) thank you!! Always try to end them with a good heartfelt line

  • 11 years ago

    by Pete Daniels

    Hey, lovely rhythm, lovely flow. Nice one. Keep going. My poetic thoughts have somewhat dried up at the mo, cuz the girl I used to write about, left me for an old flame of hers. Utter torture, so don't wanna write at the mo. I'll be back... I hope maybe.??? Ur poems great tho..nice one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Pete Daniels

    Hey, lovely rhythm, lovely flow. Nice one. Keep going. My poetic thoughts have somewhat dried up at the mo, cuz the girl I used to write about, left me for an old flame of hers. Utter torture, so don't wanna write at the mo. I'll be back... I hope maybe.??? Ur poems great tho..nice one.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aww, this is beautiful! :-) Its got love oozing from every line and is so sincere!
    Great rhyme and rhythm too.
    WELL DONE :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Okay as usual I have to stop with this poem because I will melt if I continue to read the others. This made me feel like I'm on cloud nine. Very very Sweet!