Smile....

Nice and cute...

Sad, because you're trying to disguise your pain, but nice because your friend knows what your going through and understands! I love this poem great write!

This is a sad poem but I can understand this poem very well as I think a lot of people can relate. I can like the flow is amazing as you go from you should know why my smile is fake to stay away your not worth my time anymore. I like how there are many elements here. The sadness has a deeper meaning as you seemed to love or like this person maybe. You fake a smile so you don't let anyone know what you are hiding deep within. I like it as I said. No one truly knows why we hurt inside but sometimes we don't want anyone to know at all. I like the title as well because it fits well as you make it the main point of your poem.

Let me know what you think. Thanks for reading. :)