by Redangelwings
Ok. This is a very good poem and I like how you didn't use puncuation throughout the poem per say. At least not until the end of each stanza. I thought that really was unique and that really got your point acrossed here. I like how you kinda stated a message to someone or seemed to. I think I am not sure and I could be wayyy off but maybe you are stating that you are not perfect and you are telling someone that. My thoughts go back to the you are not a balloon line. |
by Jenni Marie
I love this! |