Comments : Save me from darkness

  • 11 years ago

    by Sabrina Ortiz

    I know it's not my best,but I'm working on it still. I hope it turns out good. Please read my others and let me know what you think. Thank you very much! ^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Jonathan

    I love it.
    To answer your question,yes I will.

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is very sad again. Everyone wants to be a savior and needs a savior. The darkness does consume us sometimes and it's hard to find the light. I like how you made this for a person as well. It shows that you care for this person very much and I hope they will be there for you. I am glad you found someone though as everyone needs one :). Anyway this is a beautiful poem dedicated to a special person in your life. Awesome