Awakened

by Melody   Oct 3, 2013


Suddenly I awake,
You are gone from my life,
I feel sad,
I feel lonely,
I take a walk,
I see you there,
I start to cry,
The next thing I know,
You are holding me in your arms

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    I like this. It is short and sweet but you get the feel of being in a dream and waking up..and everything you thought was wrong is really okay. It's comforting, almost. Good job. 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Melody

      Thanks!! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    Short, sweet and very nicely done! Only critique is I would've liked it longer

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