I LOVE it.

I liked this poem a lot hun. The only thing I didn't like was the title because it had nothing to do with the poem at all. Just my opinion. Otherwise I liked this a lot. It's sad when people get hurt and if people say you are over reacting I don't think so. Your heart choose what it wants to and who it wants to. I think sometimes you just have to move on from someone hurts you. I know you love him dearly but still. Your heart loves him but the question you have to ask is do you?. I do love this poem. As you show how much you care and hurt at the same time. Please stay safe hun as you are loved by many and do what you think is right for you.

Awesome piece! But I think that Redangelwings is right; another title will present a more superp work.

D transportation of a pained heart.