by matthew allen Oct 5, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Last night you came in with a strong sent of beer on your breathe. You were saying something about you needed to skip tow.When I asked ifI could go with you told me no. you also said that you never liked me for who I am but for the money i had. When i asked you what you did. you pulled out a handgun and pointed it at me you said if i told the cops that you killed someone that i was the next to die by your hands. then you left me standing here in our one story house with a lot of questions to ask. you took the car and drove away.I watched your drunk sorry ass drive away and i didn't say anything about it. why did i let you go i had so many questions that will never be answered. like did you steal from me and how much have you drank. now I will never know. |
by WintersAngel
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by Amy
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