by Redangelwings
I love how you describe the way you are sad or depressed. Ok. The second stanza is amazing. I love how you seem to say that the beach is a place for love.The sand weighs you down. Anyway the beach is some kind of evil place bbecause you feel so alone. Then later on on this poem you seem to say that you lost the one you love as you are dressed in a gown. Maybe a dance or this gown reminds you of the one you loved. The heart sliced is extremely sad though. You are bleeding but is it your heart metaphorically or your wrists who really knows? |