Insidious

by DarkLight   Oct 7, 2013


World so plain
Plain from realization
Anonymous of the faded reasoning.
Unconquered battle of a dying soul
Unfriendly merchandise awaking anger
The story of what I see..

Corruption,
key to success for many leaders.
Abortion,
the new swag for our girls in keeping fit.
Adoption,
another way of staying out of labor ward.
Rape,
wrong mode of obsession,
and not wanting responsibilities.
It's a world of no true love,
free world,
and free from reality.
The story of what I see..

Education,
key to sin.
Bright and grate brain,
turned blunt by studies.
Filling obsessions in the innocent children,
Trying to rob them off the truth and justice
Taking away their joy and happiness,
Leaving them with sorrows and regret.
why mistreat,
abuse and neglect?.
The story of what I see..

Diseases,
have become part of your future life,
like a grazing field of a butcher,
deeper and deeper you venture.
Blind to see your destruction to our nature,
To you is just another adventure,
to seek truth you don't understand.
Without measure but full of pleasure,
the human beings leisure.
Just another story of what I see..

Am I seeing this story right?
I think I am right.
It's my brain sensation,
I don't need light.
Open your eyes to see,
the whole land is covered with darkness.
Lighten up your heart
be bright to see what is right.
You only need the innermost spirit to figure it out.

Read the story again and again,
see the truth in it....
The story of what I learnt.

It's all about what I have seen,
It's what I wrote.
Just to make you see,
Read,
and understand the truth.
It's a story of what I see.
Story of what I made you see.
Story of what we both see...

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  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was very interesting to read especially when poets can discuss life issues, ones that we may be "taboo" or we hear about so often that we brush aside new ways of thinking.

    The part about education leading to sin made me think of how good power, in a controllable amount, like in a positive leadership can be beneficial. However if brought into the wrong hands, someone will abuse that power, abuse the power of teaching.

    Good point also about a world free from reality. That is true indeed that we can convince ourselves an issue doesn't matter, or that we are at a healthy point in our lives, when in reality, we don't see the parts we need to take care of.

    I also liked your consolation on this, your encouragement to look into our hearts, find our light and spirit to live on. I also felt compelled to find the truth and not just accept what my own eyes see. There is a gift in telling the story of another and reviewing it, not necessarily agreeing with one but trying to understand.

    A few spots specifically here I will comment on:

    "To you is just another adventure."

    - What is another adventure? Say what you're referring to here.

    "Am I seeing this story right?
    I think am right,"

    Second line should read "I think I am right,"

    Good poem, thank you for sharing. I liked the repetition of "the story of what I see" because if we really look around us, aren't blinded by indifference, what will we truly find?

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Poet, eye opening lesson, I owe you big.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I have seen this before, and I have pondered about it before, it's another side of the coins. I did like how you put everything together. And your attempt at opening people's eyes.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    Wow wow wow, you get better with every poem you write, its on a different level of intensity and emotion, this is a Evolution of the poetry world. This is truth put in a charismatic order, this is pure genius

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks, I owe you much.

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