Its shows how much u love him.
you very true to that person.
11 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
There is a tiny mistake you should fix. In the first stanza third line hearts should be heart otherwise this poem is good.
Again another love poem showing how much you love this person and I love that. Your wording is great as well. It shows how much you care about this person and there is nothing much else I have to say really. I loved the flow it is better than I have read from you. I loved how you stay true throughout the whole poem as well. Well done here.