by Alanis Oct 8, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My tired eyes seek refuge among an abyss of dreams. |
by Amy
Beautiful! |
by Redangelwings
Hmmm. This is a very interesting poem. What my mind thought at first was writing something but I think you are up late at night doing something. Maybe you are stuck on homework? That is what I think at least. I like the deeper meaning of this though. You want to feel accomplished and I think we all do. Or you are accomplished already because you finished what you needed to. I like the shortness of this though. Great wording it works well here. You said what you wanted to in such a short poem but the flow is great. Grwat work. |