by L
What a story! |
by Henry
Yet another creative writing from you. |
Breathtaking piece with absolute jawbreaking selection of words. |
by Robert
This was a very epic poem right in the beginning! |
by NightFlyer
Your analogy of the battle for the thunderstorm was perfect! The intensity of it was conveyed very vividly with your descriptive words. I experienced similar lightning storms when I was living in south Florida, and can relate. A well-deserved win, Meena! |
Bravo, Excellent Acrostic, Superlatively Done!!! |
by Jenni Marie
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