Comments : Thunderstorm (acrostics)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    What a story!

    I could see nature fighting against the madness that takes place on Earth.

  • 11 years ago

    by Henry

    Yet another creative writing from you.

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Breathtaking piece with absolute jawbreaking selection of words.

    Congrats for the well deserved win :)

    all the best & take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very epic poem right in the beginning!

    Amazing write! I want to read more just like this

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Your analogy of the battle for the thunderstorm was perfect! The intensity of it was conveyed very vividly with your descriptive words. I experienced similar lightning storms when I was living in south Florida, and can relate. A well-deserved win, Meena!

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Bravo, Excellent Acrostic, Superlatively Done!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Judging comment:

    I think in all my time of judging, be it for another poet's contest, my own, the weekly contest or within my clubs over the years, I don't think I have ever come across a nature piece that managed to strike me quite like this poem did. The imagery is so...alive! I can picture everything the author describes, and I was fond that the author also chose not only to write about one of the more difficult genres to truly capture, but she also turned it into a form, thereby making it even more challenging than usual.
    "Nature throws her temperament army without mercy... "
    I simply adore this right here. It is so very true, we all try so hard in our lives to control certain aspects yet this is one thing that no-one will ever be able to control and will remain out of our hands indefinitely.
    I am very surprised that this poem doesn't have more recognition than it has already gained, as this is truly a remarkable piece.