by Hannah Lizette Oct 10, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Ripples of self rejection |
by Midnight Sky
Nice flow of words nicely done 5\5 |
by Tara Kay
This is amazing Hannah, this is so beautifully sad, the emotions it brings out are so powerful, so strong. |
by Redangelwings
Wow Hannah this is such a beautiful write. I can see why people would love this and it was published. There is so much sad imagery here throughout. I love how you say that you splash your piano with sadness. Any piano in the poem is a plus in my book haha. Anyway. It seems you are saying you are just an unknown soul that's just floating through life waiting for someone to take away the memories of pain. When you feel sad it seems there is no light or stars in this case in your heart or life. Anywho this is such a great poem with excellent wording. 5/5 |