by Baby Rainbow Oct 11, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
There is a box that contains my mind, |
by Tara Kay
Good for you, babe. This piece really spoke to me, and I just want to hug you and tell you, that you are strong, and you are amazing and this piece shows that strength. |
by Redangelwings
This is a very interesting poem here saffie. I like how you wrote about just one object the box. But you say this box is your whole life. Like a box fully of old memories inside. You also seem to say that you put your heart into this box and who ever this person is hurt it and now you don't want anything to do with it. Like your past. Every hurt in your past is put into this box from your mind. Thoughts are always bad and good. I like the end of this too. You want to give this person back whatever hurt they caused you and then you can move on. It may take time but you can move on. Great write. :) |