Comments : When Secrets Escape

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very interesting poem here saffie. I like how you wrote about just one object the box. But you say this box is your whole life. Like a box fully of old memories inside. You also seem to say that you put your heart into this box and who ever this person is hurt it and now you don't want anything to do with it. Like your past. Every hurt in your past is put into this box from your mind. Thoughts are always bad and good. I like the end of this too. You want to give this person back whatever hurt they caused you and then you can move on. It may take time but you can move on. Great write. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Good for you, babe. This piece really spoke to me, and I just want to hug you and tell you, that you are strong, and you are amazing and this piece shows that strength.

    Hugs and love always...this piece really touched me, but I also know it means so much to you too
    xxx