I used to be this girl...until I took a year to get myself together. I use to wear my heart on my sleeve, I use to be so kind and forgiving and gave too many second chances..got burned by it all. So I totally get this write.and there's almost not much to say about it besides sometimes kindness is our biggest down fall.

Lovely write saffie

I am also this person sadly. This is a great write I agree. Everytime we give someone a second chance we do get hurt. It's so hard to be honest with people though. We care so much that we don't want to hurt them. I so get what you are saying. I think we can relate to this. I like the tone and message of this poem though. We care so much that we get hurt. I also like how you write this about yourself or another girl. I think as I said other people will connect to you. So I think that makes for a better write. My favorite line is the one that says in the end it will cost her heart. I think thats very true as well. The heart is very fragile and the first thing to get hurt. This is a very great write though.