LIFE~

by Taia Edwards   Oct 12, 2013


Life,is like a garden of flowered
Each day joy blooms,then laughter from another
Though beauty there is most,,
Confusement can quite cost.
Life takes a while too be settled in
It's dirty work n filled with sin.
But if your willing to get aboard then you may see,,
'Life means so much more...'

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  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    Good poem... And I don't think you really had send "..." To comment my poem... I don't mind critisim to my poems but if you're going to be mean then keep your comments to yourself... I'm from South Africa btw which is why it's afrikaans... And the meaning behind it, is that all the black people are left on the street and they come banging on white peoples homes for help... And we don't normally help...