I flelt the filling and it move me i love it

I found your writing needs some grammar added, just simple commas and stops, and to break it up into more lines so it spaces it out more.

But your words themselves are actually quite powerful, the story and message is clear and strong, and quite touching.

The idea here of looking for someone, I am not sure if you know who it is yet, or if it someone you hope to find but don't know yet, either way would work well. Infact I think we all look for both at some point.

I liked your poem, and really would like to see it laid out so more people would read it as the message is one that can be related to. xx