by Chelsey
I like the simplicity in this piece. Its nice to read 'misc' poems every now and then, I find them refreshing because the topic is always random. |
by Lifesbreath
Exciting write! I enjoyed this very much. |
by Tara Kay
Carpe Diem: Sieze the day... |
by Redangelwings
This is a very beautiful poem Maryanne. I agree with Tara here. You do seem to seize the day so to speak. You want to overcome your fears maybe as you open your window. I think that was my favorite part. You want the world to hear what you play. I also love the part where you talk about singing and dancing then writing about it :). I think we are all fearless when we are alone but it does take so much courage when all eyes are upon you. I love how you seem to say that even if someone is listening it doesn't matter anymore.It only matters what you think. This is very bbeautiful indeed . :) |