Look At Your Hand...

by vanessarrr   Jul 3, 2004


Look at your hand- it's the world:
it's a part of you, it's defined,
it's always moving...

Look at your fingers- they're the people:
everyone's different, they're individuals, each have their own shape...

Look at the creases- this is life:
unpredictable, they go wherever, you didn't choose to have it; but their yours...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    Very good poem. i like how u think. i also like to write short poems.

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice! Such a neat idea, too... I also would never have thought of comparing life to a hand!

  • 20 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    Very very meaningful poem. A short poem witha big message. Good work. :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Christopher Sagriff

    hello

    you may not rember me but i did Judgment Day and you wrote a very nice review. now i dont know if yuo were telling the truth, but i thank you so much. it gave me hope, it told me that someone likes it.

    so thank you

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