It Hurts Bad..

Great poem

I like this poem because its short and to the point. I like the title too as it is still simple. I wouldn't change anything from what you have written here. I just noticed actually but you didn't put punctuation in here. In my opinion it works here because it is short and you are brave for putting it like that. The poem itself is great as you show how much you hurt inside here. Sometimes we don't know how we feel everyday. When we wake up we can decide how we feel in a away. But Ithink you wrote tthis poem to let your feelings out. When we are sad we always feel like this. Great write.

10/10