Football (acrostic)

by Michael   Oct 14, 2013


Fans scream and cheer for their teams,
On the ball the player is and then... a fan seems,
Over the top and screams... "pass!" just as the player receives the ball,
The other player wants the ball so he calls
Ball please so i can score
And the player scores and falls on the floor ,but,
Loudly the fans go on ,but,
Loudly the fans go on

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    My advice is put the poem alignment on the left since it's a formed poem and it should look like it's form unless you were trying to do a different type of poem then it would be good.

    The poem itself is interesting to say the least since it's basically what people see and feel when they go to a game, regardless of their age and gender. Very nicely done.

    5/5

    -Mori

    • 9 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for your comment it means so much ti me and yes i will edit the poem so the aligment is on the left

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    An excellent acrostic poem for a popular sport "but,
    Loudly the fans go on"