Comments : October 14,2013

  • 10 years ago

    by Rebirth

    I really lived the last two lines, it is awesome.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    SO true. I like the end because a lot of us do try to be perfect. :P

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is interestingly penned. There is a feel to it that is not only hopeful and informative but personal as well, as though you mean it to each reader directly, kindly, and softly. Very well done.