Comments : Only One

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    There is only one person for each heart and I feel like I know it's about Kate haha. I love the imagery here too. You make it personal to the reader and the girl you love. I love that you make such a dedication. I also like how you say she is an angel. An angel is pure joy and love and a guardian in my eyes so it's perfect for a poem. I love the ending too. As you shows she is the only one that has your heart and that shows true love xx. Every line connects to you well as the reader you gave such great detail to show what true love is. Great write. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Beautiful. Lot of soft imagery here and I know that this person you portray sees you in the same way.

    James, if it was any other girl besides Kate, Kate would hunt them down and tie them to a tree somewhere. She'd still feed them so they don't die but no.

    Kate's Brittany. Kate's.