The title catches your eye at least it did for me :). So that's always great. I love angels and its sad when they fall. you make your poems touching and I think each reader wants to help or save the characters in them. This is very touching. You say this person is a fallen angel from her own heart. The past and even her own life is falling before her eyes and there is nothing you can do to stop it. There is such a beauty to this person and you personalized her. Again. It seems it can be related to a real life. Very sad and touching. Great write:).