Burning Anger

Awesome! Want more of this.

The title of the work had said it all. I can see anger in every word in the work. I like the rhyming scheme Aa Bb Cc.

I think the shortness of this works well. The rhymes I think also enhance the poem too. Anyway this message is very strong and sad. Not a lot of people talk or write about revenge and that's what I think this is about. We as human beings get very angry easily and in these times the world grows colder sadly. I love the wording you used as well. When we show our hurt we hurt someone else and that is a vicious circle of sadness. This is very powerful and strong as I said and I love how you put your heart into this. You believe what you believe keep penning :)

I like it

Burning Anger turned East, some say,
with turmoil following his way.
He lite the oil fires,
and dwelt in quagmires
til madness took him away.