Comments : Burning Anger

  • 11 years ago

    by Lifesbreath

    Burning Anger turned East, some say,
    with turmoil following his way.
    He lite the oil fires,
    and dwelt in quagmires
    til madness took him away.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I like it

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I think the shortness of this works well. The rhymes I think also enhance the poem too. Anyway this message is very strong and sad. Not a lot of people talk or write about revenge and that's what I think this is about. We as human beings get very angry easily and in these times the world grows colder sadly. I love the wording you used as well. When we show our hurt we hurt someone else and that is a vicious circle of sadness. This is very powerful and strong as I said and I love how you put your heart into this. You believe what you believe keep penning :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    The title of the work had said it all. I can see anger in every word in the work. I like the rhyming scheme Aa Bb Cc.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dayo

    Awesome! Want more of this.