by Patrick Swaggerholic Iceking Oct 18, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
From dusk till dawn I think of you.. |
by Em
It' is over... 3 words that play and play in my head lol sad, emotional piece. |
by Camellia
It's so moving. It made me cry (I am an emotional wreck yes). I like the flow of it. Also there's this line, you might want to have a look at it: I was committed to put always put a smile on your face. (Typographical error) |
Thank you very much, am humbled. I've corrected the typographical error. |
Wow wow wow and wow!!!! What am intense, deep set and heart wrenching poem.the poem reads very much like a rap but somehow that makes the feelings more intense.I hope to read more of your works!!!! :-) |
This is really good more like a sad love story but it flowed nicely not to much rhyme and I'm sure alot of us can relate beside the suicide over love thing and some even may relate to that.. I like it's surrealness..life like.. |
This actually reminds me of one of my first .... |