Your issue is a general matter; dealing with life has not been swift to anyone! At times at the climax of depression and stress, it seems as all hopes has been murdered, but only the determined trails successfully to the swift side of the mountain.... Short, nice and precise with good rhyming scheme. ; I love it... Line 3 above entails meaning not clear to me, I'll like to be led through

Your issue is a general matter; dealing with life has not been swift to anyone. At times at the climax of depression and stress, it seems as if all hopes has been murdered; but only the determined trails successfully to the swift side of the mountain. Nice piece, short and precise with good rhyming scheme. Line three applies meaning that is not clear to me, I'll like to be led through.