by Tammy R Carllile Oct 21, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I don't want light through my window, morning just go away. |
by Mark
I relate to the emotion in this piece very well. It captured the feeling in such a way that I reconnected to something I thought was buried deeply within. Also, the opening line sets the tone well and each line thereafter follows in sync with the concept. I don't usually rate the shorter poems highly - yet I cannot argue with results. |