He's The One Who Said It (Senryu)

by Maple Tree   Oct 22, 2013


Our love is so strong
it can't go wrong, he whispers
period the end.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I am still smiling....*__*

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Short poem, but says all that is needed to say = what a senryu should be.

    I liked the title, perhaps the relevance is that you believe it even more because he is the one telling you it. I think it is very sweet and paints a beautiful relationship of a love that will never end.

    xx