Im so sorry for the kid, its horrible how so many lives are lost these days, and for u to have seen it must have been really traumatic. but still, like all ur others, amazing poem. Take care

Heyy this was a really good poem. I didn't understand though...did he mean to drown or like did he not know how to swim or something? Well anyways that was really good and I'm sure that kid feels very special to know that one of his classmates cared about him enuf to write about him after he was gone. Good Job. Keep Writing.

Love Ya
*Casondra