Hurt [Acrostic]

by Forever Hers   Oct 22, 2013


Heavenly murmurs of love put a smile on lips,
Ultimately, the absence of said words lingers and mixes with their sweet effect,
Radically changing easy breathing to ragged breaths and
Tricking a fragile heart into a state of loss.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is very sad. I understand what you mean here I believe. This first line is great because it's full of love. But I think you show here how quickly love can change. When silence is there is hurts more I think. That way it shows that something is wrong and maybelove is llessening. Like you said it does radically changes and hurts yiur heart. This is a great poem overall though as it shows how much love can change as I said and break your heart.

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