The last two lines are perfect. Ive been realizing that a lot lately... it keeps showing up in everyone I look at. I wonder if its a sign ;) things will get better. The judgingprobably wont stop anytime soon but you know what to do. Show them your strength and beauty. Show them alk the wwonderful things you have to offer. Then you cant say you didnt try. I love you. I love this piece. One of your best ideas. Though your examples (some) were a little awkward for the piece.

A really great poem something I am happy to your stuff 5/5 :-)