Leaves

I love how you can take something so simple and make it into something like this lol. Okay I had to read this a few times to think about what I think it means lol. But... I think in the first stanza you are crying for sure and you have done well with showing the imagery of crying. I love the melody of heartbreak or so it seems. This is very sad though because you are lost in woods and you lost the one you love it seems. I think maybe you are at your favourite spot. I love the imagery in the second stanza :). The leaves fall all around you meaning it's Autumn time and I feel like here that you are taking a walk of loneliness. The leaves are your friend and they know not to touch you because you arein a ffragile state of of mind. Wow the ending is such beauty. I love the imagery you played out. I can see all the leaves falling and you are like a little kid again. Oh I understand now you bring out what you mean at the end. This person you used to love and now they are a shell of a memory. But the ghost of her comes out because you are in the spot you always walk. I think. Lol. Anyway this is such a beautiful poem. :).