Comments : Hey there girl

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Awww...this is sweet. I could picture you singing this song with a guitar for your lady love..lovely. Good to read your poem after a long time...take care.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you Meena!! Have a wonderful day!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    I enjoyed reading this since I write music occassionaly.

    I could read what you were expressing, and the line flow was good.

    Keep on writing, and thanks for sharing.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thanks Robert! Have a great day buddy!

      -Ray