You Say I'm Worth Your Time

by Curtis Young   Oct 25, 2013


You say im worth your time,
But it seem that that's just a lie.
Seen as when ever i say hi,
Your always saying goodbye.
Well now im saying goodbye,
It's time for me to die.

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  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    You're likely to grow into a great writer. I just wish you didn't focus so much on simplicity "die, lie and hi" rhyme in the right stanza sure, but i believe there is such a thing as "over simplistic poetry". 5/5 for your efforts.

    -Dean

  • 11 years ago

    by matthew allen

    Good poem but dont die you are a great writer

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Please don't die. I know you want to...but I be needin you here...

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