Comments : Emotions

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I like this poem a lot because just like your title says you let your emotions out and i understand why you do. We have all felt this way though. The world does come crashing down when you have a bad past or whatever. I like the roller coaster line as well. That describes emotions so well. I can see this as being bipolar which emotions are. I think when you have a good life you are more happy and a bad life you are sad which natural of course. You can have a good attitude and there is a silver lining to everything. Will things ever turn around? Yes they will if you believe they will indeed. Anyway. The meaning behind this poem is very strong because a lot of people can relate to it. :). Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem. :) You done a great job. ALl of the emotions someone feels can either make them or break them. and this poem seems to have the kind of imagery and pain that makes anyone just want to come to you and help you.