Comments : Fireflies

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I seem to always be drawn to this poem Brittany. So that says a lot lol. Anyway I loved the way you wrote this. I think what you mean at the start of this is that you are lost or daydreaming or just dreaming while looking into someones eyes or behind them. Anyway. I think when you get lost in true beauty you fall in love and get to see inside their heart and soul. This is one of the best feelings in the world. You get lost in this world that only you two are in. Though the real world judges you, you feel no fear or hurt when you get lost with your true love. I loved the way you describe this person's eyes and laugh. You make it seem they have a heart of an angel and a laugh that is beauty to your ears. Like the ringing of a soft bell. I like the connection between her eyes and laugh. I think you say she laughs with joy and that makes the rest of soft and light. I loved this poem Brittany like wow. It makes my heart soft and full of so much joy. Putting this on my favorite list. Well done.