I truly love this poem. You went to a subject that many people I doubt know about. The imagery is very well detailed and I love how you went all out in a way here. I always love how you lead up in your sex poems. Kissing is very nice to show how much they care and italso turns both girls on :). I bbelieve the wording you used here is perfect. The lines connect so well together and lead up to the ending :). The the ending not a lot of people know about but I LOVED the last line haha. I won't go into detail but you are getting better. Xx

Wow I love this poem. Not many people would even dare to write about something to this effect but you done it perfectly!

I love it!