This is a very nice poem overall. For me o love how it tells a whole story about a couple or maybe even the love of your life it seems. What I take from your title is you have been together for 5 months and that is actually a long time. Now again I love how the poem overall is a story of your and the one you love whole life. You seemed to have everything planned out. I love how in each stanza you go into in detail anout each stage of your life and that is very beautiful. :). I liked this poem overall because of the love and emotion you put into it. I as the reader felt the love you have and I hope you continue to have. Well done.