by Forever Hers Oct 29, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Her eyes roamed over the words on the small screen, |
I like the poem it told a good story of someone faving aissue thru the screen |
The "phone's screen" stole the magic from this poem and threw it out the window, though i like the structure of the whole poem and the way it builds up to something. 5/5 |