Comments : Throbbing Ache

  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    The "phone's screen" stole the magic from this poem and threw it out the window, though i like the structure of the whole poem and the way it builds up to something. 5/5

    -Dean

  • 11 years ago

    by Im a poetic scholar

    I like the poem it told a good story of someone faving aissue thru the screen